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June 8, 2009 Respond

Jess asks: The Paragraphs you help edit in your blog posts, do people just send them to you and you randomly pick them or is it just one person you are helping with their story writing? An embarassingly long time ago I offered to critique 1 paragraph of 100 words on the blog. I opened…
Paragraph #28

June 8, 2009 Respond

Next, It started with a prickle at the back of her neck. Lifting her head, she scanned the crowded bar quickly, assessing each person for danger before moving on to the next. A quick glance showed her no one out of the ordinary, just the usual smattering of disgruntled workers and tourists that thought visiting…
Paragraph #27

June 8, 2009 Respond

Morning! You only felt fear when you had something to lose. That phrase repeated through my head, especially when it seemed that the world was a living, breathing being, constantly remaking itself on every inhale, every exhale. A being that seriously enjoyed fucking with me. Good paragraph. The first sentence creates tension – what does…
Silent Blade made Samhain Bestseller list

June 8, 2009 Respond

http://new.mybookstoreandmore.com/shop/product.da/silent-blade Wooo! Thank you! Also, we’ve been kindled: http://www.amazon.com/Silent-Blade-ebook/dp/B002BX87E0/ref=sr_1_6?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1244482009&sr=1-6