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I saw a werewolf drinking a pina colada at Trader Vic’s. And his hair was perfect.

The hobo girl hooked the rifle with her foot and kicked it into her hands.  The rifle barrel glared at William.  “You’re in my boat.”

You’ve got to be kidding me. “You can have this boat.  You can have the whole damn swamp for all I care.  After I get to Sicktree.”

“That’s a very nice crossbow,” the girl said.  “And you’re very good with it.  But I can shoot you twice in the time it takes you to load it.”

William bared his teeth.  “Want to test that theory?”

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14 Responses

  1. JenMo

    Like a drop of water to a woman dying of thirst! Keep wetting my whistle with Edge. Loved the song too. Thank you!

  2. Ying

    Thank you Ilona. I keep telling myself September 2010 is not too far away (but it isssssss). *cry* xxx

  3. Tanja

    Thank you, thank you, thank you for the snippet!!!
    And I also noticed the Word Meter! Go, Ilona & Gordon!!

  4. CheeseBK

    thank you so much. loved the snippet, and I always adored that song.

    ahoooooooooo

  5. B-ster

    Adam Sandler… he is a hoot. He should really play a werewolf in a show sometime. I could see it! Thanks for the snippet!

  6. Yala

    I love that snippet! Thank you guys so much! Are you now released from the internet ban, Ilona?

  7. Jana Oliver

    The dialog just pops. Sept 2010, huh? I know patience is supposedly a virtue, but….

  8. Heather

    At least give me a short story!!! A couple of sentences isn’t enough!!! And this sounds so interesting! :(

  9. Farcapegirl (aka Elaine C.)

    Yeah my William appears on my webpage and makes my heart sigh… go kick ass hobo girl!

  10. Christina

    Love at first sight. So romantic. ;-)

    Though, when I saw this title, I actually thought you accidentally posted an Odd Shots post to your personal blog

  11. Michael

    snipets!!! drools…
    Thanks for the snipet fix.

  12. ChrisP

    Thank you, thank you! Cool word meter, too!

  13. Gillian

    I like it already. There’s a reason why you guys are on my ‘automatic buy’ list.

    Good luck with the rest of the manuscript!

  14. Brandy

    Yeah! William! Thank you for the snippet, it makes waiting a whole year a tiny bit bearable. Tiny bit. *G*

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