I saw a werewolf drinking a pina colada at Trader Vic’s. And his hair was perfect.

Ilona October 14, 2009 14

The hobo girl hooked the rifle with her foot and kicked it into her hands. The rifle barrel glared at William. “You’re in my boat.”

You’ve got to be kidding me. “You can have this boat. You can have the whole damn swamp for all I care. After I get to Sicktree.”

“That’s a very nice crossbow,” the girl said. “And you’re very good with it. But I can shoot you twice in the time it takes you to load it.”

William bared his teeth. “Want to test that theory?”

Writing,

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JenMo October 14, 2009 at 10:33 am . Permalink Reply

Like a drop of water to a woman dying of thirst! Keep wetting my whistle with Edge. Loved the song too. Thank you!
Ying October 14, 2009 at 11:03 am . Permalink Reply

Thank you Ilona. I keep telling myself September 2010 is not too far away (but it isssssss). *cry* xxx
Tanja October 14, 2009 at 11:34 am . Permalink Reply

Thank you, thank you, thank you for the snippet!!!
And I also noticed the Word Meter! Go, Ilona & Gordon!!
CheeseBK October 14, 2009 at 1:51 pm . Permalink Reply

thank you so much. loved the snippet, and I always adored that song.

ahoooooooooo
B-ster October 14, 2009 at 2:18 pm . Permalink Reply

Adam Sandler… he is a hoot. He should really play a werewolf in a show sometime. I could see it! Thanks for the snippet!
Yala October 14, 2009 at 5:27 pm . Permalink Reply

I love that snippet! Thank you guys so much! Are you now released from the internet ban, Ilona?
Jana Oliver October 14, 2009 at 5:55 pm . Permalink Reply

The dialog just pops. Sept 2010, huh? I know patience is supposedly a virtue, but….
Heather October 14, 2009 at 5:56 pm . Permalink Reply

At least give me a short story!!! A couple of sentences isn’t enough!!! And this sounds so interesting!
Farcapegirl (aka Elaine C.) October 14, 2009 at 6:45 pm . Permalink Reply

Yeah my William appears on my webpage and makes my heart sigh… go kick ass hobo girl!
Christina October 14, 2009 at 7:56 pm . Permalink Reply

Love at first sight. So romantic.

Though, when I saw this title, I actually thought you accidentally posted an Odd Shots post to your personal blog
Michael October 14, 2009 at 8:09 pm . Permalink Reply

snipets!!! drools…
Thanks for the snipet fix.
ChrisP October 14, 2009 at 9:07 pm . Permalink Reply

Thank you, thank you! Cool word meter, too!
Gillian October 14, 2009 at 10:02 pm . Permalink Reply

I like it already. There’s a reason why you guys are on my ‘automatic buy’ list.

Good luck with the rest of the manuscript!
Brandy October 15, 2009 at 12:37 am . Permalink Reply

Yeah! William! Thank you for the snippet, it makes waiting a whole year a tiny bit bearable. Tiny bit. *G*