Dear Sharon

dear-sharon

I am ruining your snippet graph.

Cerise was already moving.  William heaved the crossbow up, pushed his way through the sea of dogs, and headed up the stairs. He made it through the door in time to see her turn into a side room on the left.

“You and I are going straight.”  Kaldar popped up at his side with a buttery grace of a magician.  “Keep the pace now, that’s it.  I think I’ll take you to the library.  My sister is in there and she’ll keep an eye on you, while I go scrounge us some food.  The kitchen is a madhouse this time a day and if you go down there, there will be no end of questions.  Who are you?  Are you a blueblood?  Are you rich?  Are you, by the way?”

“No,” William said.

“Married?”

“No.”

Kaldar moved his head from side to side.  “Well, one out of two isn’t bad.  Rich and unmarried would be perfect, married and poor would be two strikes out, nothing good there.  Poor and unmarried, I can work with that.”

12 Comments

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  1. 3girlmom
    3girlmom November 16, 2009 at 12:14 pm . Reply

    Thank You Ilona! Made my meh morning not so meh anymore!

  2. knight
    knight November 16, 2009 at 12:34 pm . Reply

    yay we’re getting spoiled by another snippet.

  3. XxxXLozXxxX
    XxxXLozXxxX November 16, 2009 at 2:20 pm . Reply

    Hehehehe great snippet. Thank you ilona x

  4. Ying
    Ying November 16, 2009 at 2:21 pm . Reply

    Yay!! More snippet!! Thanks Ilona.
    @Sharon: I can help you plot another snippet graph!

  5. Yala
    Yala November 16, 2009 at 2:34 pm . Reply

    Kaldar sounds cool :D

  6. CheeseBK
    CheeseBK November 16, 2009 at 2:37 pm . Reply

    we need to do more graphs *nods* :D

    thank you for the snippet, ilona!

  7. =A
    =A November 16, 2009 at 5:31 pm . Reply

    I believe I’ve met Kaldar :)
    =A

  8. Sharon
    Sharon November 16, 2009 at 6:23 pm . Reply

    I’m okay with the snippet average being skewed if it means another snippet, Ilona! Thank you!

  9. Brandy
    Brandy November 17, 2009 at 1:30 am . Reply

    Kaldar sounds quite interesting. *G* I’m always up for a snippet!

  10. JenMo
    JenMo November 17, 2009 at 6:43 am . Reply

    I have such a crush on William. Thanks for the snippet!

  11. Talking Mouse
    Talking Mouse November 17, 2009 at 12:05 pm . Reply

    In my head William turns to Kaldar and says You’re not what I’m looking for in a husband.

    Please do Edge 3 with Kaldar, he sounds like a fun character to torment.

  12. Bublee01
    Bublee01 November 17, 2009 at 2:32 pm . Reply

    Ok.. everyone can hate me but I don’t want anymore snippets. I want the book in it’s entirety. I want the surprise! The bits and bites are not enough. I love the blog so I guess I will just have to soldier on… sigh…

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