I started my day by spilling coffee all over myself. It is amazing how much liquid a cup of coffee holds. What followed can be described as a French comedy where I tried to clean up the coffee and rescue documents, books, and my keyboard. My mouse shelf is attached to my keyboard, which sits under an angle under the desk on an arm. If the mouse pad doesn’t have a wrist guard, the mouse slides off of it to the floor. I tried to clean up the mouse pad, then I put the regular mouse pad on the shelf, and the mouse slid off it and broke apart. Then I put the mouse back together, and went to find the old mouse pad, determined to rinse it off. I couldn’t find it, so I dug through the trash, because I thought I might have thrown it away… I didn’t; it was on the counter, drying. Digging through the trash was nasty.
So yeah. The day went sideways from there. I ended up putting together furniture. But onto more fun things.
We’ve received the copyedit of Magic Stars and went through it. The final file came in at 21, 500 words, which officially knocked it out of the novelette territory and into a full-length novella.
ARCs are now available.
Final beta is upcoming. We’re basically doing a proofread stage at this point, so if you beta’s before and want a glance at this, email me. We may do a public beta later.
So it became clear from the feedback that some big things are happening in this novella story-wise. I didn’t think they were that big, but apparently they are. A couple of people saw some early review teasers on Goodreads and emailed regarding print availability. Originally we had no plans to have this available in print, but we don’t want to penalize anyone by any means, so below is a poll to see how many of you want to read this in print.
And finally, a snippet.
Derek moved fast on quiet feet.
The bartender downstairs, a stocky woman with hard eyes and a harder jaw, hadn’t heard him. She just happened to look up as he made his way to the staircase leading to the back rooms. She reached for the shotgun she kept under the bar, then saw his face and changed her mind. The face used to be a problem, but he’d grown used to it. He knew his eyes assured people that the inside matched the outside, and so the bartender turned away and let him walk up the stairs. It was an old wooden staircase, probably pre-Shift, before the magic waves had battered the world and its technological marvels to dust. It must’ve creaked and sang under the weight of humans every day, but the worn steps kept their peace this time. He knew where to put his feet.
A short hallway stretched before him, two doors on the right, three doors on the left. Unlit. The owner was trying to save on electricity or the charged-air bill. The rooms were empty, all but one, the second on the left. He paused by the door and listened. On the other side of an inch-thick piece of wood people talked and moved. Five. All men, drinking and talking in low voices. The draft from under the door brought the odor of cheap beer to his nostrils mixed with the metallic stench of human blood. He’d followed this scent across half the city.
People lied. Scents never did.
The shadows under the door indicated a single light source. The magic was down. The light leaking through the crack under the door was electric, buttery yellow, and judging by the hallway, the owner was too cheap to spring for anything but a single light bulb. He reached into the pocket of his jeans with his left hand and pulled out a rock he’d picked up outside. This didn’t warrant the claws. He took a knife out of its sheath. It was a simple combat knife, fixed blade seven inches long, coated in black epoxy, so it didn’t catch the light.
The five men inside heard nothing, their voices still calm. Relaxed.
Derek thought back to the house from which he’d come, leaned back, and kicked the door. It splintered, bursting open under the impact of his superhuman strength, and he hurled the rock at the lonely light fixture above the table. Glass shattered, and the room plunged into darkness.
His instincts punched a cocktail of hormones into his bloodstream in an electric rush. Darkness blossomed, opening up like a flower, revealing five heartbeats wrapped in scent. His mind signaled “prey,” propelling him through the darkness toward the first warm body scrambling to pull a gun. Derek sliced across the man’s throat. The knife sank deep, too deep, severing bone. Overkill. He was a little too excited. He spun to the left, dodging a bullet before he saw the starburst of the muzzle flash across the room, grabbed the man in his way, and punched the knife into his chest. The heart ruptured. Derek jerked his knife out and spun away to crouch by the wall.
Shots popped, loud in the small room. They were firing blind, panicking.
A heartbeat straight across from him, the man spinning wildly, his gun spitting bullets.
Boom, boom, boom . . . click.
He cleared the table between them in a single leap, the impact of his weight knocking the man off his feet. He landed on top of the gunman and severed the carotid and jugular with one fast, precise stroke. The fourth man spun and fired in the direction of the noise, but Derek was already moving, leaping forward in a crouch. He knocked the shooter’s arm aside, sank his knife into the man’s groin, twisted, and dragged it up. The man screamed and went down.
Two heartbeats gone, two rapidly fading, one fast and frantic. Someone in the room was still alive. His nostrils flared. The odor of blood swirled around him, intoxicating, demanding more. More blood; more murder; more living, kicking prey struggling in his fingers; more fresh meat he could bite and rip. He shut the bloodlust off, put the knife on the table, and paused to pinpoint the faint sound of a human being trying to breathe quietly through his mouth. There. He stalked across the room, avoiding puddles of blood cooling on the floor boards. The man lay flat, hugging the floor. Derek crouched in one fluid motion, locked his hand on the man’s throat, and dragged him up. The man gurgled, writhing in his hand, trying to claw with feeble nails at the arm that held him. One squeeze, one crunch of bones, and it would be over.
Derek dragged him to the back of the room and jerked the thick curtain open. Moonlight spilled onto his captive, enameling his tortured face with blue. White, short dark hair, at least thirty, old enough to know what he had done. A professional criminal.
Derek grabbed a chair with his other hand, set it against the window, and slammed the man into it. The thug sagged, desperately trying to suck some air into his lungs. His eyes widened, his pupils so large with fear, their blackness swallowed the irises, leaving only a narrow ring of blue.
“I know you,” the thug squeezed out, his voice hoarse. “You’re Derek Gaunt.”
Good. This would go faster. “Six hours ago, the five of you broke into the home of Randall and Melissa Ives.”
“They weren’t shapeshifters, I swear. I swear they weren’t.”
“You put two shots into Randall in the hallway and left him to bleed out. You killed Melissa in the kitchen, three shots, two to the head, one to the chest.”
The man’s eyes bulged.
“Then you went upstairs and shot ten-year-old Lucy Ives and her seven-year-old brother Michael. You annihilated the whole family. The question is why?”
“They weren’t shapeshifters!”
“No, they were human beings. They were also smiths.” Derek reached over and took the knife from the table. “Melissa Ives made this knife.”
He thrust the knife into the man’s stomach and cut a long shallow line from one hip to the other. Blood gushed from the cut. The air smelled sour as the blade slashed the intestines. The man let out a ragged yowl of pain and choked on his own terror.
“Why?” Derek asked.
“They had a rock.” The man squeezed the words between sharp gasps. “Some kind of metal rock. Caleb wanted it.”
The man nodded, trembling. “Yes. Him.”
Caleb Adams had started out as a witch, but his coven had cast him out. He’d proclaimed himself a warlock, and now he ran a gang on the edge of the Warren. Bordered by South-View Cemetery and Lakewood Park, the Warren had begun as part of the urban renewal project, but magic had hit it hard. It was poor, treacherous, and vicious, a war zone where gangs battled with each other. Caleb Adams felt right at home. He was violent and power-hungry, and according to the latest street talk, he was defending his new turf against two other gangs and losing.
“Where is the rock now?”
“We couldn’t find it.”
Time for a more detailed conversation. He raised his knife.
“We couldn’t find it!” the man cried out. “I swear! We trashed the house looking for it. Rick and Colin shot the guy and his wife, and they both died before we could ask.”
“Why did you shoot the children?”
“That was Colin. He shot the woman and then ran straight upstairs. He just went nuts.”
He wished he knew which one was Colin. Sadly, he couldn’t kill him again.
“What does this rock look like?”
“About the size of a big orange. Shiny metal rock. It glows if you take it outside in the moonlight.”
The man’s breathing slowed. The bleeding was taking its effect. “Three . . . ,” he whispered.
“Three pieces of a rock. Rick said the rock had broken . . . into three chunks. Rick said Caleb already had one and wanted all three. He sent . . . two crews out. I don’t know where the other crew went. I told you . . . everything. Don’t kill me.”
Derek’s lips stretched into a smile on their own, driven not by humor but by the instinctual need to bare his teeth as the wild inside glared through his eyes. “There is gunpowder stench on your hand and blood spatter on your shirt. It smells like Michael Ives.”
The man froze.
Derek smiled wider. “I don’t make deals with child murderers.”