Let me tell you, this story is a winner. I loved it. Not to be a downer, but remember this is a short story, it's 68 pages. But, you will see a different Jim. Finally!
Here is a quote:
".....her legs jerking back and forth, rocked
by spasms. She dashed into the water and smashed into the
statue of Buddha, leaving a yellowish splatter on his side......"