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The writer says thank you. The doctor visit is part of the plot and the fact that he is unconcerned and is behaving unprofessionally is a plot point, which is explained later in the narrative. The writer is considering whether or not to offer the work as a free web serial. I strongly cautioned against it as I know from experience the toll that kind of feedback can take, but the decision is ultimately up to them.