BAYOU MOON
BAYOU MOON Question
A. asks Is Declan in the second book at all? For a short while. Since apparently we all are okay with the snippets, here you go: “Wow.” Gaston gaped at the two story mansion, situated on a perfectly manicured lawn. “Wow. Is that all one house?” William grumbled. Gaston never set foot out of the [...]
On Facts, in small chunks
First, just because I have a Doberman, doesn’t mean she is a vicious hellbeast. I wouldn’t recommend breaking into the house in the middle of the night, but really, once you’ve been let in and approved by the family, Del is more likely to sneak into your bed at night than corner you. We have [...]
Snippet
I am going to drink my coffee and sit next to Gordon while he pirates. So here is a snippet bribe instead of a post. William sat at the bow, as far away from the corpse of the hunter as the length of the boat would allow. Why she insisted on dragging it with them [...]
My Weakest Link
One of the earliest critiques I have gotten on OWW was from a published writer who said that my plot was good and my worldbuilding was good, but I had one giant issue that would prevent me from getting published unless I did something about it. My characters were flat. It was a fair criticism. [...]
Poor William
We had to go and get glasses for the whole family today and I’m working late to make up. Thought I’d share qa tiny snippet to make up for my snarling earlier. Must keep it entertaining. Oh and here is some Vitas for you.
